Oh, huh. Saying "the eponymous" instead of "his eponymous" would make it a little better. Using it only as a backward reference (rather than, here, putting it before the title) would make it a lot better. But I still don't like the sentence you quoted at all.
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Oh, huh. Saying "the eponymous" instead of "his eponymous" would make it a little better. Using it only as a backward reference (rather than, here, putting it before the title) would make it a lot better. But I still don't like the sentence you quoted at all.